another bud (haiku)

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another bud
opens amongst many
Tokyo spring

Gina  23 march 2014

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  1. A moment that might be overlooked amid the abundance of spring, nicely caught. Do you really say "amongst?"

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    1. Hello Bill, thanks for that... Yes I say amongst, but perhaps for the purposes of short and haiku among might be better ... In double checking, the dictionary says they mean the same and are used the same with among being the earlier form. Thanks for commenting. Always good to get feedback.

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  2. "another bud"
    __The prod to search for more.

    Grand! _m

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    1. Nice, Magyar .... Good to hear from you. I like 'prod'.

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