honeysuckle vine (haiku)

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honeysuckle vine
clings tighter to the fence --
railway track

Gina 28 March 2014

2 comments:

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    1. Is the word superfluous? I did angst over it - the vine is a clingy one but when the trains go by it holds fast and is not pulled away by the trains slipstream. So it seems to me to grip all the more. Your thoughts?

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