A pair of tan shoes (haiku)

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a pair of tan shoes
in a crowd of blue suits
train commute
© Gina September 2015

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a single tan shoe
in a crowd of blue suits
train commute
Gina ...... 7 April 2014

3 comments:

  1. Must be a tourist.

    Would "a pair of tan shoes" work?

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    1. all this time later ... OF COURSE ... a pair works ... :) how are you Bill ???

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  2. i cant even remember now why 'a single' was the impetus ... however a pair works forever ... thank you Bill

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